tagNon-Erotic PoetryFlues : Dank desires

Flues : Dank desires

byRazzRajen©

Flues down hillsides      
He stood at the edge and looked down      
who would take the plunge,
why should the curved paths
in subterranean caverns hold water?

      breakers cascade and dark wisps of ripples
fleet across the face of the water    
                                               scows move turgidly,

His thoughts turn over, lay,
limpid
      Pools of her eyes and dank desires
Cloud his mind.

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