- Non-Erotic Poetry
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Click heregentle openings separate
pathways behind
stray shadows
clinging to black tinged
blades of exit
thorns recoil
holding the stem
of memory
wrapping around
each withering
root stock
planted in
semblance of a rose..
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 16 years agoThis poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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Anonymousalmost 19 years agoin your coffee? You are knocking them out of the park,
and this is a grand slam. Great layout and wording.
sand
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoThis is one of your best, deep, profound and compelling... in short...perfect!
QP
dcpoet44almost 19 years agonice things in the folds of darkness and vivid in this case.......nicely done.......don
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoSpare use of language but the images are strong and I agree with Rhyme Fairy--it's a very moving poem, prayerlike.
:)
Angeline
RhymeFairyalmost 19 years agoYou have to know. I loved this poem. Very vividly you paint the picture. My minds eye echos of lost ... pain ... very moving poem here...
