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Click hereIn the heat of a summer’s night I ache for you
When the temperature reaches 45 degrees
I fling off the duvet and imagine your screw
And then I am complete, my Louise
You dance with the large moon rising behind you
Your slim figure silhouetted in the evening light
I want to join you too
And share the moment holding you so tight
I feel the sheer magic of your sway,
They take my senses away
My being is part of you, your rhythm so fine
I hold fast wanting to make you mine
You kiss me so soft and so sweet
And I hear you say ‘I so love you Pete’
Then I feel you take me complete
Baby you are truly my elite
But it is all a dream, you are not there
Just the smell of your perfume in the pillow case
We made such a wonderfully perfect pair
I see the tears on your face
You felt you needed to dump me
I knew not why
But how was I to know baby
You were soon to die
I will remember you as you were
Here on the mattress with a flower in your hair
The way we enjoyed the thrill of each other’s touch
I liked that so very much
You are not gone at all
I feel your spirit close to me
I feel the warmth of your breath, the tease of your demise
As you make me quadruple my size
I feel the squeeze of you hand
The sweet kiss you change to much more
The cupping of your palm below so grand
I am all ready for your everything to the core
It is heaven on earth and I do bond with you
Your spirit we share together when you were alive and well
I close my eyes, smell you there so warm and true
And soon we share the spice of our forever love so swell.
I like the message but the rhymes are a little mixed up and for a rhyming piece there should be a little bit stronger of a meter. Keep writing, I liked it!