tagNon-Erotic PoetryForever Yours

Forever Yours

byStargodiss©

I love
The way
You make me
Smile
Inside my soul
My heart
Full
Of happiness
Just a thought
Of you
Brightens
My world
Every day
You are
My smile
My hope
My love
Everything
To me
My heart
Belongs
To you
I will
Stay
By your
Side
Always
Sharing
Our hopes
Our dreams
Every step
Of the way
Building
Our love
Our life
Together
I am
Forever Yours

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by Stargodiss11/30/13

The short lines and meaning

Thank you for the comments!
The way it is worded and put into shorter lines keeps each line with a separate meaning and also a combined meaning with the short surrounding lines as well. Every break inmore...

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by todski2811/20/13

the ending really caught my attention

If you had done one of two things, with the ending,


either

Together
I am
Forever
Yours,

or

Together
I am
Yours Forever

you would have highlighted a rhyme, and either one of those ways is what Imore...

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by LesseloovesPeter11/19/13

I like the shape the short lines give the piece, something soothing about it.

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by twelveoone11/19/13

Short lines

unless other wise indicated, merely mean the absence of long lines.
Brevity can be a virtue
both in width
and length

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by Oldbear6311/19/13

This old romantic

Loves expressions of love - but help me understand the really short lines?

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