From the voyuer

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do I
should I
do they really want me?
they’re watching me
but I’m suppose to be watching them
are they suppose to stare back like that?

Gods,
she’s getting into it
she likes it rougher than him
I can tell.

she’s doing it again
staring back at me
I wonder if she’d be as excited between my legs
with those big brown eyes staring up at me
her lips decending on me
her tongue's thrilling me now
feeling her breasts brushing against my thighs

they’re both staring now
but I’m suppose to be watching them
was that a slight nod from him,
there,
again,
as he moved between her legs,
pushing into her slowly,
feeling each thrust
yeah
gaining momentum,
pushing harder against her,
she likes that
making us moan with each thrust
inviting me with her open mouth
tilted back off the bed,

is she really
do they want me
they’re staring
but do they really want me,
should I,
do I?

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
homer~

wow...excellent play of words

truely impressive~

and very much the wit of Pindar~

Daisy MayDaisy Mayover 19 years ago
Yes!

Yes, yes, YES!!

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Yay!

Keep it going, don't stop now! i mostly just want to know if this is a man or a woman, lol, good job!

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Clever

I love the irony of "rules" in voyeurism! Very clever read.

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
hee hee

how does it feel, Mr Voyeur, huh? I love this concept HomerPindar, and I do hope you continue with this, umm, series :D

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