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There are no words for this want
eating my peace.
Soft strokes of midnight
blue
blow kisses 'cross
tomorrow, turning
ache into hope, full
filling, falling
stars of wonder: us.
There is no want for this world
without release.
Cold, blooded bones
buried
in choate pleas.
Yore sorrow, burning
turning pain, full
pleasure into promise -
missing only touch.
There is no world for these words
incomplete.
Liaise on dark fields
yields
more than less.
Unless the heavens
embrace my need, full.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 16 years agoThis poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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Bill Dadaover 18 years agoI've been there and done that, but I have never been able to put it into words like you have. Just amazing.
ty,bd
LeBrozover 18 years agoLook what I just found on the top list!
What to say, after so many kind words; even the Vixxx spoke in such stunning terms.
I like the way your words progress,
stanzas linked in smooth continuity.
dcpoet44almost 19 years agovote and all the other comments left ahead of this cover my thoughts as well......nicely done.......don
Dar~almost 19 years agoI felt your words inside myself. Like an answer to how I sometimes feel.
Wanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years agothe title of this piece and your pen name. The poem was full... of such breathtaking expressions, it is absolutely exquisite! And you are most indeed VERY impressive <smile>
I am just spellbound by poets like you. Thank you for sharing this with Me today, imp.
Vixxx
Maria2394almost 19 years agofor the way I left a comment earlier. I know you care about all the FB you recieve, just as I do. Thank you for the very kind and gracious note you sent me. :)
Maria2394almost 19 years agovery nice, Impressive!! I know you dont care much for my opinion, and I know why, but this is really good. I am seeing a lot of growth in you, excellent growth,. Keep it up!!
maria
