galactic ascension

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Cordelia
Cordelia
11 Followers

Again to stellar song and cosmic praise,1
residing in the star-stuff of your form:
that curve of ardor is for devotion gaze.2

So speak to me in starlight’s whispered rays,
become the rhythm set by meteor’s storm
again to stellar song and cosmic praise. 1

With desire’s own topology, we’ll raise
the limits, and the universe transform
that curve of ardor is for devotion gaze. 2

So change the course of comets with a phrase,
a tone, a minor chord. You can perform
again to stellar song and cosmic praise. 1

Travel at the speed of longing. Phase
and amplitude cannot be uniform:
that curve of ardor is for devotion gaze. 2

With heat to rival fusion’s starry blaze,
bent toward like gravity to warm
again to stellar song and cosmic praise, 1
that curve of ardor is for devotion gaze. 2

1 in Hyper Music, by Liar ©2004
2 in October Odyssey II, by WickedEve ©2004


Cordelia
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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.

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average ginaaverage ginaover 19 years ago
A song of poetry

I didn't read this poem. I sang it. It was utterly lyrical and lovely. I felt enriched reading this poem. Thank you for writing.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
all I'm saying is

you are such a show off. lol Show off some more, girl. :)

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Beatiful images

float throughout this Cordelia...you make the form aspect light and airy..lovely

BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
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Cordy, darling, you just blow me away! I am in awe of you, for very good reason! Thanks!

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