- Erotic Poetry
- Green Line 3am Grind
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silk screams a tortured sacrifice
witness to a war with waist bands and buttons
I gnaw
claw
circles through a chastity of fabrics and metal
that singe scrapes into swollen flesh
zippered teeth torture a catch and release of need
just the crown peeks inside
thwarted at each stab by your cotton condom
you grind down
another fraction sinks deeper
a truce of filtered fluids meet
exchange kisses
wince
thump
pant
thump
grind
thump
thrust
thump
bite
thump between handrails and poles of stainless steel
we rock satisfied and hungry in the rhythmic cradle
of welded joints
of wheels to rail
of wilted contentment
whose echoes encourage explosion
the coming crescendo corrupted by conductor
who tells us our stop is next
reminds us to stand back from the doors
do not put head or arms out the window
and that safety is first
disheveled we throb a metronome into the night air
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 15 years agoI think this would make a wonderful performance piece. It's filled with phrases and images that leap out at you. The repeating sounds of lines like "the coming crescendo corrupted by conductor " give it a good rhythm, too.
