Green to Blue

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demure101
demure101
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That first true tumble in the hay which should
Have been such fun still makes me feel an ass –
I’d never even thought my girlfriend could
Do as she did just then - but then, she was
Full of experience, I green as grass.

I’ll hand it to her now, I should have been
My age that time. She would have made the night
A joy for both, had I not been so green –
But as it was, I got so bad a fright
I cowardly jumped up and turned to flight.

demure101
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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
5ed

my guess low score on this is because what the anon considers lack of "imagery"

green to blue overdone, blue?

njoyjadenjoyjadeover 11 years ago
Hey,

Hay is over-rated anyway!! Showing up counts!

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
FIGHT OR FLIGHT

from 1st time fright. TK U MLJ LV NV

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