Hate Me Too

bytheoncomingstorm©

I hate the way
You look at me
You fucking hate
Everything you see
I’m not what you wanted
I’ll never be
But I thought someday
You’d fucking believe
You had no faith
That’s nothing new
You don’t believe
You said I was a fool
You got your lies
I got the truth
You said you hate me
Well I hate me too
You say I’m worthless
But I’ve got news for you
You can’t stand me
But I hate you too
You had no faith
That’s nothing new
You don’t believe
You said I was a fool
You got your lies
I got the truth
You said you hate me
Well I hate me too

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by kemander12/28/13

Smoke 'Em

If ya got 'em. If not smoke in hell. Kinda what you mean?

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by theoncomingstorm11/10/13

I need to reword it. I struggled with how to best represent the idea that was running through my head and went back and forth before deciding and apparently I forgot to change that line back. I'll fixitmore...

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by Ashesh910/21/13

You hate me ....

I hate me too ......
I hate you....
Semantic confusion or Freudian slip ?!

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by LesseloovesPeter10/20/13

I'm going to pass on this one, sorry.

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