Heart Keeper

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Heart Keeper

By: Many Feathers


You are indeed Heart Keeper,
No safer place could it ever be.

And though I hated leaving it,
You gave a piece of yours to me.

So now there's two hearts beating,
Though they sound as though they're one

And though you're there, and here am I
We share the setting of the sun.

We go to bed beneath the stars
And dream the future to unfold,

And share our thoughts of passions need
And of erotic secrets told.

We wake and hear the bird song,
Of waters running down the brook.

We smile inside at hearts now shared,
And know the miracle it took.

Your name now is Heart Keeper,
As all who know you soon will see.

For I am now a part of you,
And you a part of me.


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champagne1982champagne1982about 18 years ago
ahh love

No one can argue with the sentiment of your poem and I enjoyed the way you told the story. My one drawback with it was that your rhymes weren't very subtle.

I hope you develop this lyrical poetry skill you have further. There is marvellous potential hiding in your muse.

Carrie

sybilrosesybilroseabout 18 years ago
To trust your heart to someone

What a specail gift you give. Love the poem !

Beam_of_liteBeam_of_liteabout 18 years ago
You have

found your gift Many Feathers and I have found mine.For each of us to find the one who we will share the rest of our lives with at almost the same time...well all I can say is that the spirits have each brought a special sunbeam into our lives.My wonderful friend my heart is happy for you.

VolupiaVolupiaabout 18 years ago
I am envious

of the love between you and your Anna, which you so generously share with us all. May you always love like this, may you never stop sharing. (xxx)

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
~~

So many touching romantic writes between yours and Anna's. Sharing your feelings before your entire public. Hope the story never ends.

CaPic267CaPic267about 18 years ago
So seductive

With words so fine I could get lost in your spell and never know it...or mind it. A nice soft romantic touch in a hard often bitter world. CP

OSoBuffOSoBuffabout 18 years ago
Well said!!!

The way I feel about the person who reflects me and truly sees me!!! Wonderful words that say it better than I ever thought. tks

EmJ0385EmJ0385about 18 years ago
A Love Poem!!

So wonderful---these feelings of love you speak of here---where two truly feel as one.

PatHous56PatHous56about 18 years ago
Wonderful

Great feelings expressed in this sweet love poem. Lovers, though apart, remain together as one. Patricia

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
heart felt

I truely enjoyed this read, (~_~)

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