- Erotic Poetry
- Heavenly Bodies
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Click hereclingy webbed top, slides
down cherry, kissed skin.
puddling down the carpet
below. pink thong rides high,
on saw horse hips. Fidgety
fingers, fumble. wantonly
grasping halo of soft, feathery
hair. mounting hunger unleashed
upon utopias peaks. razzling
raspberries suckled by beseeching
bites. twiddling twist, jerks
close. cosmic tortious tornado
uniting sonic bodies of heated
morphical mounds. smokey haze
smolders volcanic combustion
released. heaven, on earth.
- COMMENTS
echoes_sover 18 years agowhat have I been missing? or who?
I do love this, beautiful work. Thank you.
Honey123almost 19 years agoThe second time I read, the more I liked it! Great description in your words...
~Honey
Tathagataalmost 19 years agokissed skin and saw horse hips.
The line breaks threw me off a little as did some of the punctuation...all things that get better the more you write.
: )
I can see you getting better each time.
Keep at it
Anonymousalmost 19 years agouniting sonic bodies of heated
morphical mounds. smokey haze
has nice resonation qualities I enjoy reading...smiles/bluerains
Anonymousalmost 19 years ago"slides
down cherry, kissed skin.
puddling down the carpet
below."
and
"pink thong rides high,
on saw horse hips."
Another nice one!
Tess
dcpoet44almost 19 years agonice and smooth like a tequila sunrise going down......loved the word combinations......don
Anonymousalmost 19 years agofairy girl.
i like reading you more,
the more that you write.
it just keeps getting better.
love. the. short lines.
seriously.
4°
~hellbaby~almost 19 years agoI love the feeling you made here.Smokey haze smoldering and utopia's peaks really so vividly put you right in the haze. Great, thanks
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoYou have a real gift
for descriptive writing
RF, and your erotic pieces
sizzle! Keep up the good
work my friend, you just
keep getting better.
~ Jenn
