- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Her Dance
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Dressed all in green,
my summer's sensual delight;
seduced me and cooled me
with slow languorous caresses.
Now in a dress more exotic,
shimmering hues ~ yellow, red, orange, and gold;
her dance, choreographed by outside forces,
speaks anxiously of erotic surrender.
Stripping before rapt eyes,
flinging her garments upon me;
some days the strip a slow tease
and others a riot of passion.
She stimulates senses before slumbering;
her stark reminders ~ a promise
that in the Spring she'll return
to seductively caress once again.
© Leon Brozyna 2005
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREalmost 16 years agoI am so glad the poem popped up!(the joys of the new technical wizardry available now!). I think the poem should have been classified under erotic. First: just because it describes nature it does not mean it can't be erotic -as it is! (I hate to quote myself, but if I must..."sex is everywhere"). Second, you fooled me for a good portion of the poem, sex was on MY mind. Best season's poem I have seen in quite sometime.
JaneAustenalmost 16 years agoThe colors play so well together, don't they? But autumn certainly is an exhibitionist, to say the least. I love your promise of spring and I do hope she buys a new green dress for that dance! Wonderfully appealing, like the seasons themselves. ~JaneAusten
darthjserover 16 years agoIn praise of what nature has to offer, strip again and delight me when I see your clothing this time, it would not be the same.
BikeNutabout 18 years agoSpending so much time on the roads and trails of the South, I'll never take those trees for granted anymore. Now I don't know what you'll do about the other seasons, but Spring has to be dressed in lingerie!!! Billie
Wanton Vixxxenabout 18 years agofor all four seasons will make a Norman Rockwell style painting that I'm very eager to visualize within your verses! This premiere all- season poem has Me salivating for the others as individual pens, Leon. And if that's not enough of a nudge, please look outside your Buffalo, NY windows and see Mother Nature has FINALLY given the northeast the season of spring. <hint, hint, hint> This poem, of course, is in My faves as you have given Me both an exotic and erotic glimpse of a tree's quad seasons dance. However you intend to title the subsequent pieces, I am looking forward as so many others here are, to the LeBroz Ballroom Dances of Nature. <smile>
Vixxx
OSoBuffabout 18 years agoI'll never look at a tree in quite the same way. Who ever knew they could be having so much fun!!!
SweetDealabout 18 years agoAnd I finally had to sign up and leave this comment. I really love this piece and agree with these other recent comments about doing the other seasons. My only request is that you not make it a Part 1, 2, 3, & 4 or something as lame; try something different.
CaPic267about 18 years agoLeon, Love this one (but of course)and you should follow that suggestion about doing three more for the other seasons. This one has such an active vibrant feeling; I can't wait to see how you do the other seasons! CP
PatHous56about 18 years agoSo I decided to check out LeBroz to see what you have to offer. Your word usage is clean and concise; I so enjoyed this little poem, but I wonder, why don't you do one for each season? I like this almost-erotic feel you have here; listing this as one I especially like. I'll have to go down the list of your other offerings over time.
Patricia
EmJ0385about 18 years agoThe perfect read for this first day of spring, especially down here in the Deep South. Soon her spring flowers will be replaced by shades of vibrant green and the pines will lose their dull green.
