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her shadow

byFujisashes©

her shadow
languishes on me
as I reach

for the curve of breast
just beyond my breath

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by Maria239401/12/14

ooohhh

what a surprising little poem! good work!

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by butters01/12/14

once again, very nice.

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by todski2801/12/14

nice imagery

succinct and the sound component in the final lines is sublime

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by Ashesh901/11/14

For the curve of her breast

Just beyond my breath !
Breathtakin'ly excellent:5-ed .

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