Holy Wars

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INTRO: I've spent a lot of time as a relief worker in war zones and, as well as hating them, I hate the hypocrisy of those who excuse them. I'm currently recovering from injuries sustained etc. So this is personal - forgive me.

HOLY WARS

WARS: Fill churches faster
than preaching ever can;
control the population-growth
a great deal better than
the best-intentioned working
of a contraceptive plan.

WARS: stimulate economies,
or so we're often told
by those who make their livings
from the items that they've sold
to convert some shattered bodies
into vast reserves of gold.

WARS: have innate abilities
to loosen family ties
and, generally, are good if you
ignore the 'wheres' and 'whys' -
and whether God has time to cry
for every child who dies...

and why, when fighting starts,
He doesn't nip it in the bud
and chooses to ignore the prayers
of those who think He should...

perhaps its 'cause WARS fill His Church
like preaching never could?

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BriteaseBriteasealmost 9 years ago
OR

Perhaps "HE' doesn't exist. A figment of our imagination. (and maybe a bad one at that)

loveoverlustloveoverlustalmost 9 years ago
Holy Wars ........ The Religion of the Fanatics.

..... Isn't it a Paradox? A War, that is Holy.

An Anomaly of our so called Evolution. Our Hollow Pride in being the most Intelligent of all Species.

Its nothing more than a link to our animal past. A Devolution of Humanity.

Has GOD ever been inside a Man made Shrine?

valeriefvaleriefover 11 years ago
It almost hurts because it's so real

Hope your injuries aren't too serious and you'll soon be well again.

badgertoobadgertooover 11 years ago
The anger and the frustration are almost overwhelming

I suppose you have to see - as you obviously have - the results that war brings to ordinary people, to understand that completely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
*****

Five.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WHAT GOOD ARE THE JIHADS

they only benefit themselves. TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
5ed

nice return from the beginning. little comment on the org. you're pissed, but when you get some distance, lose some of the propaganda, i.e.

have innate abilities

to loosen family ties

and, generally, are good if you

you are telling, make it more individual, as in showing

read wilfred owen if you get a chance

guy will tear your flesh off your bones

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Cuts to the quick.

Well done. 5*

demure101demure101over 11 years ago
Nothing to be forgiven in writing such a poem!

It's a great poem - a thought I suppose many a person entertains sometimes. On the religious aspect, after WWII Marelene Dietrich said, when asked if there was a God, 'No, there isn't - and if there is, he's completely meshugga.' (Or words to that intent.) Holy Wars indeed....

greenoniongreenonionover 11 years ago
That obviously comes from the heart

and it has - with an innate rhythm - a power that cuts through so much of the rubbish spouted by leaders and religions when it comes to the dilemma of trying to justify the killing of ordinary men and women in the name of whatever cause.