How could I let you go

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You came softly into my life and touched my heart.
You brought joy into the depths of my being.
A joy I had never known before and so I ask,
How could I let you go?

Within me you have stirred the passions of dreams
And aroused the dreams of passion in the night.
You have brought new life to me and so I ask,
How could I let you go?

From deep within my soul you have touched the poet,
Brought words to life and feelings to the surface.
You are my verse, rhythm and rhyme and so I ask,
How could I let you go?

When love comes into a life as yours has come into mine,
The heart is surrendered and the soul is free to love.
The whole being is consumed in passion and so I ask,
How could I let you go?

I have heard your words and beheld your voice,
The softness and soothing nature calms my deepest fears.
You wrap me in your loving words and so I ask,
How could I let you go?

How could I let you go?
There is only one answer from this heart of mine,
There is only one solution to this puzzle within me,
I could let you go - - - - only into my heart forevermore

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sacksackover 19 years ago
very sweet.....

a truly good "warm fuzzy" kind of poem! Superb!

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
the refrain is nice

I'd use "passion" a little less. You used it about 3 or 4 times. You may want to rework the last stanza a little. It seems to be the weakest place in your poem. I think a stronger ending would improve this piece.

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