How I want sex with my lover

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How I want sex with my lover

By SubBabs

Passionate is how I want sex with my lover
With the lack of control that comes with submission
The world where I have no sway
The capitulation, compliance, bliss, and surrender

Breathtaking is how I want sex with my lover
Painful and embarrassing may be the encounter
The ecstasy will permeate our consciousness
Creating in us an all-embracing, bizarre condition

Unquenchable is how I want sex with my lover
With appetites impossible to quench
Gentle touches of a tongue
Painful strokes of a lash

Eternal is how I want sex with my lover
Blindfolded, never knowing what is next
Total bondage, unable to move
Will it be bliss or will it be pain, the same

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice visual rendering with words!

Love the use of "bizarre", don't change a thing! Capitulation, compliance, painful and embarrassing, all great choices! I liked this very much! Thanks..~

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
delicious surrender

nicely done

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
replace quench

sate, maybe?

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionover 13 years ago
Not sure about the appropriateness of "bizarre"

It does rather stick out like a sore thumb - but a nice effort on your part pet.

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