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By
The Violet Rose
orange blossom perfume
in the shade of the orchard
first time the thighs part.
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bluebellabout 15 years agoRefreshing
I love short poems. Even if I do sometimes wonder how we ought to read and critique them. This is a lush, spare little gem and I'm very glad you shared. Your other poem is just as good. This was mentioned in today's poetry recommendations on the Poetry Feedback Forum; feel free to come in and take a look. :) Thank you for sharing.
