- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I Can't Make You To Love Me
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I'm wishing on a star in the sky
To light up your face
I'm writing a song to sing-
Something to brighthen your day.
I tried to kiss you last night
Under the oak tree where we first met
But you pushed me away
And told me goodnight.
Now I know the reason:
I can't make you to love me-
Thought I wish I could try,
I could wait till morning
But I'd rather sing you a lullaby tonight.
Darling, you are my air
My sun in the sky.
You are my warmth from my pain-
Without you I can't stand the rain
But you ran away from me
And I asked myself why
I know I hurt you then
But now I know why:
That I can't make you to love me
But I can't hide this pain
This room is all but empty
Still I'd rather sit out in the rain.
- COMMENTS
quietpolyalmost 20 years agoIt's a nice poem. One suggestion:
You mentioned you can't stand the
rain without him/her. And the last
line says you would rather sit in
the rain. Conflicted feelings about
the rain. Is it on purpose or uninten
tional, as in the rain is better than
her/him? A very sweet poem, nonetheless.
