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Click hereThe blue hue sky
will die slowly
when night comes to call
pulling down the wall of blue
it was a black sky after all
an Illusion of hue
The fog that shields
our normal view
shrouded in a dense mist
engulfing everything
touch it and it's not there
but it's grey hue
is everywhere
The serene forest thicket
lures you to it
only to find
that mother natures abrasive
for those who were blinded
by the flowers and shade
greenery laid softly
next to ivy of poison
I opened up to you
and gave you me
the years rolled by
over the same old sea
now your gone
and there is just me
and an illusion of you!
Besides being trite, this poem needs an editor. Please learn when to use apostrophes!
i deducks 4 badly speiling grammer & sin tack's,
awesome poem Nin~
very witty and eye opening
Your Illusion of hue
was magnificent, (~_*)