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Click hereRain pounding
Senses reeling
Pulse racing
Breathe catching
Moan escaping
Pace increasing
Pelvis crashing
Clit humming
Scream tearing
Now Now.
Now!
Bodies entwining
Sweat trickling
Time stopping
Moment expanding
No beginning
No ending
Together and Alone
Thighs Opened,
Smooth wet,
Lips spread,
His sex plunges passionately into me.
Given up,
Sublimated body,
Ecstasy fusion,
Love quivers in the deepest of me.
Inside Ebb and Flow Outside Fire and Water
Vision Tanned and Rose
Skin Sensual Pleasure
Delight Floating
Desire Iridescence
Smooth and Wet
So much for the passivity of gerunds, as you so well demonstrate in that first strophe.
My only suggestion is to change:
"His sex plunges passionately into me."
to
"He passionately plunges into me."