tagErotic PoetryJello Girl

Jello Girl

bytheoncomingstorm©

At the edge
And I'm falling
Finally allowed to cum
Your name I keep calling

I cry out for you
I congeal within your arms
My insides liquefy
I dissolve within your charms

I'm weak with orgasmic bliss
The room begins to swirl
Like putty in your hands
I become Jello Girl

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by theoncomingstorm11/10/13

Written after cumming so hard that when I tried to stand my legs felt like jello... That's the only way I could describe it

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by Ashesh910/02/13
by todski2810/01/13

I love

seeing that in a woman, satisfying for both parties this is pretty original as a metaphor at least I haven't seen it and it paints it perfectly.

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