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Click hereI'm not going to beg, I'm not going to cry and i wont prevent it, if you want to let it die...
short and sweet, but personally I think it would have looked better in 4 lines. But a nice job anyway.
I liked the content of this. It is almost metrically correct. The last half should have the same stresses as the first half which had a nice anapestic meter. For example, the last part "if you want to let it die" could have been written "if you want it to die" to match the initial meter.
I like the way you did not use line breaks, actually, although most people would probably have written this as 4 lines.