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Click herei never put it together
and i dont think i tried
but now my life has changed forever
and tonight i cried,
played the game
but now it doesn't feel the same
because now i remember faces not just names,
maybe just maybe this is what i deserve
still i ask for forgivness when i get up the nerve,
its no fun being alone asking god why me?
so now i have a new respect for love and sensitivity,
stars in the sky represent tears i have caused
and i swear in the distance between my sobs i hear applause,
its cold and its raining,yet the stars have never been so bright
still the woman i love lied and cheated and i dont think its right
This is good. If you trim every extra, unnecessary word, it could be very good.