Last Call

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it's such an elegant crowd
five star all the way
anyone who's anyone
tux and gown soiree
dom perignon on ice
immaculate canape
not a soul is dancing
musicians all still play

your finest single malt
leave the bottle please
having trouble standing
but not because of these
the crowd is getting rowdy
some are on their knees
ever tilting floorboards
flares above the seas

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jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
A historical allusion

adds a flair (or is that flare) at the end. A nice twising ending that was there all along.

jim : )

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Last Call

Nicely said,

an interesting angle of view.

Thank you for sharing.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
A Titanic

achievement in poetry. Very nice, Kunda.

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