Last Kiss

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Even exit routes have arrows.
Your lines had only points
indicating the locales
of entry and exit.
Fine but you didn't finish.
You made the next point,
so I found an eraser.

In the apology note
because the paper was too small
(it had to stick to your car)
I put arrows at the bottom
and a kiss on the back.

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todski28todski28over 9 years ago
welcome to the poetry forum and new poems :) I gave this piece a five

my mind is wandering in strange directions, the mention of exits, and arrows and bottoms, a kiss on the back, with the duality of it, it could as easily be a literal kiss on someones back or conversely a kiss on the back of the note, it's as if you are intersecting a bad erotic anal experience with a break up,

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
Last kiss on the

Back of an apology note , Playcatch ?