- Non-Erotic Poetry
- late october walk
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the chilly scarf of the autumn night
hugs my neck and
sends shivers down my spine
the slum darkness
punctuated by the distant street lights
claims the orchard
back in my apartment i get
in touch via internet
with my old schoolmates so distant
wh
2006-10-19
- COMMENTS
ishtatover 17 years agoThis is good.It communicates the "feel" of the situation rather than just sight and sound.The economy of words allows the reader to imagine the broader picture.
twelveooneover 17 years agofirst one sags
second one killer
third one pure Du Fu, I think
Very nice feel to this. Overall I like alot.
