let go, my darling

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my eyes concealed
wanting to see all that you reveal
looking into a sort of darkness
a void with nothing but what my flesh can feel
with a touch my body shakes
slowly tracing sensations down my back
a sudden sharp pain
moves me
i can feel you press against me
then within me
pushing hard and slow
filling me
overcome by waves rocking my body
quickening my pulse with each forceful thrust
you take me and i cry out for more
hands pulling me against you
urging me to give myself over
to release my pleasure for yours
falling over i want to beg but knowing
my place i submit
with each wave i forget
the power i held and handed to you
my love
the one who gives me purpose
to breath your name
the beads of my devotion flow from my inner core
moistened by your throbbing masculinity
wanting and receiving
all of you
again and again
faster and harder
forcing me to let go
seeing more then blackness but new reason to be
belonging to you
i no longer want to continue my journey for other things
only your desires of me
and having giving i rest and wait
ready to give again as many times as you wish
molded by your hands i begin to break what i once was
to become yours

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

Truly incredible. Please write more.