Life Preserver Blues

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We made love for the last time,
you fell asleep in my arms.
I fell into your sleep,
woke up crying.
You woke up angry.
Now there is a river between

us, dreaming widely.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
a true sad goodbye...with meaning..

paints a moment of loss so fragile...and nicely placed...bluerain

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
you are correct

ain't that the truth, it's about just <grin> like that.

Very witty poetry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
All I can say is...

... is that this poem is sad but complete. Good.

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