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rikaaim
rikaaim
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Everyone can see me.

But I have to talk to you.

You are a friend, above all.

You showed me how to let go.

So...I am.

I'm letting you go.

I'm living my life.

I'm done surviving.

You showed me how to live.

I took the step.

You gave me the push.

I feel I owe you, but I don't.

I don't owe you a damn thing.

You wouldn't want me to.

Let go.

Live.

I am.

Thank you.

Good bye.

Again.

I know you are protecting me.

You don't have to.

Do what you must.

Live.

Above all else live.

Don't loose what we learned.

Live.

Be yourself and live.

Good bye.

Again.

rikaaim
rikaaim
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sacksackalmost 19 years ago
full of feeling.......

and based on real life? Hope you are feeling better recently!

BelegonBelegonalmost 19 years ago
An awful lot of...

...conflict here Rika. Which is actually a strength because that is how these kind of situations can be. Often you yourself don't know what you are thinking or where you want to go next.

moonlight elfmoonlight elfalmost 19 years ago
I liked this!

Pasha, your words painted your feeling. Nicely done!~Moonie

angelicminxangelicminxabout 19 years ago
Feelings...

...come through quite clearly. Good job! ~Minx

The_FoolThe_Foolabout 19 years ago
Feelings

Are obvious and well stated. Good job. With the repetition, I sense that your feelings don't match your words, or your words don't tell the whole story. But that is good, lying by omission and implication makes the reader work to grasp the true meaning.

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