Looper

byHarryHill©

Looper
Round and round
giving and taking
Life granted by death
Paradox
Erased with a bullet
The future never happens
past yet to be lived
When the end
finds the beginning
is life over
or just starting?

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by butters07/02/14

just found this

yes, the paradox...

i really like 'erased with a bullet' and how you close the loop on this one

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