- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Love ~
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Click here~ Love ~
A moment in time
filled with love lasts forever,
but lust comes and goes.
Copyright © Leon Brozyna 2006
- COMMENTS
CaPic267about 18 years agoLeon, Don't know what a senryu is -- okay, I'll look -- but I like what you say here and the way you said it. Thanks. CP
lobomaoabout 18 years agothe begining of a thought
is always only one word
splintery fragment ideas
mandala fractals can be traced
back beyond their origins
yet I always get trapped by words
there's never nearly enough
to say what I want to say
so I am ever envious of
a simple few lines
that say it all.
My Erotic Trailabout 18 years agoyou have a way with words, and this says it all with so little in a big way, nice write.
Wanton Vixxxenabout 18 years agoas does the heart when the word "Love" is spoken. This is a tight and tender poem that only a person that has both inhaled and exhaled the feeling could write. Lust may be powerful, but in comparison...the always weaker sex.
Today you have penned the universal key that unlocks the heart. Like loving the right one, this one is a true keeper, Leon.<smile>
Vixxx
