Love and Hate

from where they were birthed to fruition. TK U MLJ LV NV

I tend not to like stuff that is more abstract when it doesn't have a lot of specific detail (and I do this all the time in my own writing, lol), but the balance of this poem--stanza to stanza, really carries it. There is a traditional form (with a weird long name parallismus something) where each line of the poem contradicts the preceding one. Your poem sort of reminds me of it--the way it moves back and forth between the emotions. Really well done!

i really liked all your 3 poems and ur stories as well. u know u should consider publishing, i mean that u should become a full time writer because ur style of writting is really refreshing. have u ever thought of writting for mills n boons? i know they can be craps at time but there r some good authors. go on their website, they r often in search for new authors and believe me u `ve got what it`s take. i too write poem but mine r mostly about bitterness of living, i would so like to be able to write such beautiful poems like yours. i have published poems on the island where i lived, but i write in french, and i write short stories called nouvelle in french, anyway i know what i am talking when i`m telling u , u should try writing so go for it!atta girl!