Lust and Regret

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Sense vanquished by sensation.
Cruel words and careless deeds fade
into shadowy dusk.
Your touch
cauterises the pain
of past indiscretions
and my body forgives you, again.
Outside, in the darkness, rain
weeps like rivulets of acrid sweat,
drumming a funeral march.
Inside, I close my eyes.
The pleasure fades away,
vibrant pink to desolate grey.

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live4passionlive4passionover 15 years ago
deep within

beautiful tension and contrast.. pure and naked feeling that reaches out, resonates and moves.. deep within

LeBrozLeBrozover 15 years ago
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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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"and my body forgives you" I like this line. You have some nice images in this one: weeps like rivulets of acrid sweat/drumming a funeral march.