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Click heredry skinned drunks
gaze into their cheap glasses
sneaking peaks at her
cashmere red breasts
wondering if she'll flash
her patent leather smile
laughter of the
"still wet behind the ears" boys
makes her thighs quiver
as they share shots
and perspective
within earshot of her kinky curves
the other women
prowling prey, purr
at the boys and drunks
ignoring her tall round ass
as it taunts their
bar stool flats
She, sheltered, box-bound
tied to her post
takes their coats
hanging hook by hook
their loud histories,
but watching only him
Intrigued by that handlebar
moustached mouth
and the way he watches her
differently
from her big browns
all the way south
..is right! deliciously done.
every word was powerful and kept me wanting more.
I have this one printed out and pinned next to my desk. Alliteration, internal rhyme and BDSM metaphor, wasn't it? ;)
or the shutter precision of the images, or the even flow, or even the layers of wordplay (her tall round....their flat...). It's all of it, woven strong, yknow like you, Perks. :)
you did it again Chickie. Nice work! It's easy to be there through your words.