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Click hereIf dreams were reality
I'd sleep all day.
Lay back with a smile on my face.
No fantasy eight to five
just you and me.
The end of the old rat race.
Feel the constant sea breeze
steady eight knots.
Keeping bugs and sand at bay.
Just enough to fly a kite
keep the sweat down.
While dreaming our lives away.
Yeah...
If dreams were reality
bet your sweet ass.
That mine would be at the beach.
I loved your poem,
it had a sunny at the beach style smile to it <grin>
8 knots <grin>
There are people you can't separate from a force of nature and it is impossible to think of you, Sandy, without the water. I see you're keeping well and dreaming of summer waves, as am I.
See you on the shore.
This is one of those poems you read, lean back in your chair, and say "Right on."
Nice one, enjoyed!
pure sandspike-- if you figure this out let me know. think I prefer the mountains though
well done, ss!
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stanza nearly ruined it for me. You said everything so perfectly in the preceding lines, the last one changed up and it almost seemed harsh compared to the rest. but i did love the poem besides that one little thing :)
sums up why one lives to retire and move to the water...nothing compares to drifting with the waves..sunshine fresh air and your dreams...awesome ss..blue