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Click hereMINI-SKIRT TEASE
ever so slowly...
hands come to the hem;
an urge of climatic need
to seize the moment,
with the look of,
"SLIPPERY WHEN WET"
with beady raindrop eyes;
induced to intoxicate...
it's highway express
in erupted togetherness.
arpeggio's stir; attracts
musk's sensual breath
in a slow - but sure soft hand
gently down the cheek
with pink-crimson blush,
so powerful-
that this imagery,
is smooth like satin
spread across the sheet -
~unrestrained~
subtle and not so subtle imagery! I don't think you need the apostrophe in "Its". Otherwise, well composed!
I love the line, "arpeggio's stir; attracts musk's sensual breath" so much so that I can almost smell the scent from here! Mmmmmm!!! To tell you the truth, this poem stimulated alot more than My sense of smell <wink> Now where did I put that mini skirt?...
Vixxx
Nice erotic poetry and an all around sensual read, loved the feel of this poem and the taste of the source by being very vividly put in the drivers seat of this wonderful expression <grin>
like this, what can I say, subtle detourment of a cliche, good work.
"it's highway express
in erupted togetherness."