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monkeys swimming away in the night
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special pawing
sensitive claw
bear-like
infected gash
(words added)
a safe night
tumbling like circus taught us
filler words
meaning of life is thievery
jubilee of criminals
some exotic island or peninsula
stuck into lake or salt ocean
sailed to, plundered, raped
plundered, raped
casino rich and porky
glitter fitzgivings
arms full of lady
raped by self
laying alone in id
having self
swimming away
by way of
conspicuous accoutrements
conspicuous accoutrements
clever sauce with tears
onions galore
garlic with dirt still attached
dug from a wet plot
during rain followed by nap
coulda waited for hole in cloud,
could have waited for a cloud with a hole to pass over head
over life
in the satisfied night
holding hands
with happy monkey
another understanding stranger
Odd stuff and happy monkeys. I can't say I understood it all... does that mean I am just a happy monkey. I guess if the fur fits I'll wear it. A saucy, sweet poem. With a slight whiff of garlic and onions. Excellent,
jim :)
but damn I love this poem. How do you manage to mix silly and insightful and sad together in such a wonderful way over and over again? (Did you do an actual title because it was too long for the little box?) :)
reminiscent of Burnt Norton and "...garlic and sapphires in the mud..." love that poem, and this one too :)
wish i woke from naps with words like these in mind-- damn!
and finishing with--
"could have waited...."
we all could wait
glad not too long