More or Less an Elegy

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susansnow
susansnow
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everybody likes the front man but Ray,
sweet Ray! Giving us Raygazms hunched
over your organ; I wished I was hunched over
your organ. Everyone saw Jim. But Ray,
Raymond Daniel Manzarek, we felt you. You held
my hand and smiled as I broke on through.

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
you just lit my fire!

just saw this! Wow, susan, you have a great eye. five-o

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
Love this Susan!

I always preferred Ray to Jim, myself. :D

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