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Click hereWaking: daylight calls
behind a
cloud; birds
duetting to soft
slumbers, barely
moving: to look with
fingers finding
warm skin,
lithe body,
resting in
wait
for me
stroking: nails gently
down,
swirl around
loop up to return;
shuffling closer
as the
slumberer
murmurs,
and
sinking: under; the
early morning warmth
stifles, then
comforts,
my limbs finding
the
curves and joints
of yours;
the practised movements
spoken by our
bodies still immersed
in sleep:
muscle memory
inhaling: the musk,
the heady dark scent
of you, the you
who slept nine hours
not yet
awake but rising
to meet my
lips, in a
slow breathing,
long
lingering,
tongue
savouring
suck.
Repeat: flicking tip
over you,
your wetness
reflected in
my own,
found with
fingers
dancing,
brought
up
to
your mouth
to
suck
as I do.
Gripping: hard at the
base; a hand
twisting around,
following
the trail of my
tongue;
I indulge
my
hunger,
a guttural
moan from you:
the girl
needs
a
feed.
Hands: through my hair
as hips
jerk;
it can't wait, this sort
of awakening is nothing so
spiritual but primal,
it
takes
no time to meditate,
it's coming
the push.
Both hands at
my temples
as you fuck
deep,
my
mouth;
hold it there,
hold it
girl.
Pull back.
Two gasps
entwined.
Again.
I blink
the water from
my eyes,
whilst
good morning
kisses
fill my throat.
The gasps repeat,
ever rasping,
until too close.
Watching: your strokes fast
before blurry
streaked
eyes;
I offer
an open mouth,
but you
make it
drip from
my lips,
to
kiss yourself off,
to start
again
kissing: tongues searching,
senses nourished,
the first words -
good morning -
mumbled between
breaths;
- dirty bitch -
I smile, knowing
your day
started well:
- i love you too -
i whisper,
and I show you,
legs apart,
that I do.
...each of you for taking the time to comment, I appreciate it
This sets the bar very, very high.
Structure, pace, rhythm, length are all spot on.
Very good indeed Mollie, very good indeed.
:)
then I read on and on. (disclaimer) It would have ended nicely on the 5th verse
..
not yet
awake but rising
to meet my
lips.
Except damn that was hot. Your structure is interesting you control the read nicely with the punctuation and jumping stanzas. Running rhyme at the end finishes the piece really well. I gave it a five.
Love the structure of this. It's long but it works. Will try to come back later and comment more. 5.