tagNon-Erotic PoetryMosh Pit Family

Mosh Pit Family

bywakingDown©

One way ticket to hell
Just waiting for the cue

Two lines screaming
Voiceless in the din
Waiting the moment
The sound the note
To begin

Wall of death
Crashing together

Bodies collide in joy
And continue in pain
Pleasure in the chaos
Crushed in the mosh

Blood and sweat
Bonding those in metal

The exultant members
That thrash and crash
Smiling in blood
And laughing in bruise
A violent esprit

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