- Non-Erotic Poetry
- My Poem
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Pour your hot interpretation
over
the frozen mound of my muse
until
the darkness dents the white
into
a swirling blend that I stir
with
my spoon watching loop
around
weaving one into the other
before
taking slow beginning bites.
- COMMENTS
Angelinealmost 17 years agoI really like this. It's not a big epic of a poem, but a simple piece about worplay that uses worplay and a weave-like structure to make its point.Both erotic and abstract--well done! This is another poem that might work well as an illustrated piece. I don't know if you have Photoshop or a similar program, but you could do some interesting things with shaping to underscore your theme.
Thanks for the read!
Peace,
Angeline
