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Click herei could even get it from
*shudder*
him
sans understanding, anyway
i can't get it from them
they're far too young
to even want it
outside themselves
i could get it here
to some degree
from some (ir)regulars
who understand peripherally
but it's not only the what
that i need
it's the who, too
i want it from you
~ ~ ~
Words that dance with feelings that haven't been asked to dance in a long time.
ty,bd
Gave me a wistful feeling on the first read - so many things matter for it to feel right! Then, it struck me as bold and pointed - yes, my needs can be filled elsewhere, but I choose you to do it. I'll be wondering which it is.
Flipped a coin for the rating. It generously came up to the higher of the two ratings. Not sure I agree.
so strongly in my own heart. I felt every word, every yearning syllable. As always your words touch the core.
that's awesome. You have an amazing poetic voice! Good work!
rich, clear, beautifully woven and a bit sad. I see "want" in the verse, and "need" is the title, and I sigh, nodding agreement.
I really enjoyed this, the set up, the end, and the way you wove the "other" words in, good job :)