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Click hereSadness closes around
Taking my heart
and stomping it
To the ground it goes
Stomping
Jumping
Burying
Deep is my sorrow
Eyes filling with tears
Catching my breath
Oh, I cant breath
Pain clenching
my heart and soul
Needing his love so
Seeing him leave
Pain
Hurt
Crying
Face aflame
Eyes tear stained
Grief
Heart broken
He left
Just left
He left me
Here without him
I just can not comprehend that
What have I done
What will I do
Without his love
Oh, I love him
Heart and soul
Feeling the pain
shooting thru me
Hurt so bad
So deep
Feeling it to my toes
Withering my soul
Slicing me thru
Chopping me to bits
Eyes burning
Tummy so sick
Throat so tight
Oh Lord, what will I do
Help me
Please
Don't let it be this way
Don't let him leave
Please
Come back
Oh Please, I scream
and shout
Come back here
Hands covering my tears
Cocooned in misery
Deep
dark
nothingness
It's over now
This I know
So dead inside
Nothing will ever
grow again
Dead
Dead
Misery
Grabbing
Shaking
My body thru
Head down
Shoulders shake
Eyes filling
Grief overwhelms me
Loving him
like no other before
No other ever again
So hurt
Alone
Craving that smile
That voice
That man
My man
Hurt slicing
cutting
Don't leave me now
Never go
Please stay with me
Love me as I love you
"Oh baby" I cry
please don't go
Falling to the ground
Shaking
Crying
Needing
Grief overwhelms
Consumes me
Drags me
Deep in its pit of hell
Never to return
Sorrow
Longing
Hurt
Alone
Dead inside
Without him
Without my man~
excellent little piece
filled with pain;
verse raw writ,
it's all here
pain
hurt
loss
~
Love the way this flowed into the emotion of poem~
From a 'jewel' of a poet~
I've said before Lil how you have a way of bringing words to life and you have not dissapointed me with this. What alot of people may not know is that a broken heart is more than just a metaphor it is physically painful, a gut wrenching feeling of intense pain and loss. I felt that in your poem, I felt the pain and thought you did a wonderful job with this one. So real and beautifully written.
almost gasping pace of this poem, but feel it is a bit repetitive and could bebefit from some trimming. Nonetheless, a heartfelt write and read.
I always enjoy reading your poems, LilDarlin. Keep on writing them, especially your erotic ones. I'll keep on reading them.