night wish, granted

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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 03/04/2021
Created 11/13/2007
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l8bloom
l8bloom
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here at last,
the horsehead nebula
nods its ever-stretching redshift
in my direction.

I don’t know why you waited so long,
night,
to rescue me from the harsh
light of

Sol,
himself
someone else’s
merciful cool.

It doesn’t matter.
Let your airless wind
bust the hot tears from my face,
wisp me into that thin stream of

molecular dust
between your bodies
that human fingertips name
nothing.


l8bloom
l8bloom
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2 Comments
LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
~~

How the hell do you manage<br>

to turn<br>

astronomical terms into<br>

sensuous concepts<br>

<br>

LiarLiarover 16 years ago
Nice

"that human fingertips name nothing" Indeed. Nothing is merely something, spread thin.

I didn't quite get the "merciful cool" bit, but still a really enjoyable poem.