No One Desrves

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Names, words, nothing spoken can eat away at the insides.
Used in the wrong way can leave unseen scars.
Each scratching away at love's surface, leaving behind a wound.
This would starts to fester, eating away at the heart.
Leaving behind an infectuous diseased chasm.
No one needs this. No one needs the hurting words.
No one should bare the names that maim a person's soul.
And the deafening silence with no spoken words
Then all that's left is an empty shell.
Until some one with true love lances the diseased wound.
Freeing the heart and soul to love and trust again.

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annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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you used some very vivid language here-- made me cringe in a good way! I would like to see this distilled down a little bit to its essence, then again I have a short attention span. I already forget what I wrote in my first sentence.

keep writin'

~anna

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