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WriterDom
WriterDom
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No poem today
nothing scratched on parchment
penned on papyrus
or whittled on wood
just clashing cliches
tense triteness

and a longing to taste you

WriterDom
WriterDom
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RisiaSkyeRisiaSkyealmost 17 years ago
hello, old friend

Nice to see some of your new stuff, WD.

Oh, and I've been wanting to tell you--I read "Did Keats?" to my writing classes.

wildsweetonewildsweetoneabout 17 years ago
Poetry Forum

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone

WickedEveWickedEveabout 17 years ago
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This is good, WD. I really don't have any suggestions for improvement. I could find something, though. :) But it's a good read just the way it is. Brief, interesting, and I like the "tense triteness" alliteration. The last line gives it a nice erotic twist.

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