- Erotic Poetry
- Not the normal explanation
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Click hereNaked bodies entwined
Merging together before being ripped apart and then merged again
Screams of joy and lust abound
Sounds grow louder as hardened love is thrusted by one into the other.
Fluids mix and drip where the two meet
Both wanting more and more
One wants it deeper, the other tighter
And that’s where babies come from…
- COMMENTS
dcpoet44over 18 years agoperhaps. i think that most would understand this as being normal in any case. but i think you could show a contrast to actually make it seem so unusual that it wouldn't be normal. the words are nice though...take a step further and i think you'll have a winner. just my take on it. its honest and its not a damn anonymous comment that leaves you totally beside yourself.....don
