- Erotic Poetry
- Ode to the girl in the AV
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Click hereOde to the girl in the AV - a prose poem
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I looked at her av.
Sexy, but beautiful in a purely aesthetic way too...
I read her posts.
Quick and witty - even catty; but many others were caring - stroking the egos of those to whom she replied.
I chuckled at her humour, drooled over that av - and then she changed it! Anger flared! How dare she take down that icon of beauty?
But while the new one - two - three - didn't make me catch my breath, I suddenly found myself laughing at the visual wit.
Eventually, I summoned up the nerve to send a PM.
She replied. With sensible caution, but friendly encouragement.
I know she has a partner.
I know she lives in my country - and she's trusted me with the name of the town in which she lives.
I want to drive there.
I want to drive there now - arriving in time for breakfast...
I want her to welcome me - and I want her partner to welcome me too. I want them both to trust me.
And if that's all that happens, well, I'll still be the richer for the experience. When I drive home again, I'll be glad that I went - for nothing.
And I'll still look at that av - whenever she puts it up again -
And I'll still love her.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 19 years agoWithout saying too much. :)
Quite speechless, actually!
Much love,
Katie-Lou
xxx
Wicked-N-Eroticover 19 years agoVery nice expression F5. I believe everyone has felt that way at least once in their life, and if they haven't then I feel sad for them to not have known that kind of passion.
Wicked
impressiveover 19 years agoI agree -- obsession ain't necessarily a bad thing. Thanks for sharing, F5! ~Imp
herecomestherainover 19 years agoI really liked the lines about "I want to drive there, I want to drive there now". Perfectly and succinctly describes the insistent pull of compelling desire. :)
Lisa Dentonover 19 years agoI won't say any names or embaress anyone but I have been mesmerized by certain AV's. Don't fret about the one comment, I mean, you said you'd like to get there in time for breakfast and be welcomed. I didn't see any stalking or nothing wrong.
fifty5almost 20 years agoAuthor[quote] This is scary
04/20/04 by Anonymous
Pardon me, but you sound obsessive and I worry for the girl in the AV. But hey, it is just a poem... right?[/quote] Just for the record...
1. No, it wasn't 'just a poem' - I really did feel what I wrote.
2. Yes, it was obsessive - love is like that.
3. No need to worry for the girl - my obsession wasn't psychotic, or abusive, or whatever word you feel expresses that threat.
And in respose to the other posts...
Yes, I did want her that bad, but it was unrequited. That's happened before and I've lived through those disappointments too.
And I have reasons (which I won't post) for believing that the av really was her... and it wasn't my idea of 'poetry' either - so I subtitled it 'prose poem' - but I did want to share, with her too.
Nonetheless, it expressed deep feelings - so I submitted it.
Life has moved on, but is still richer for the experience - and for expressing the feelings it gave me.
f5
Anonymousabout 20 years agoI'm not sure it's my idea of "poetry" but it narrates a tale in a poetic way - so what the Hell. Bear in mind, 55, that AVs are not always of the post-er. Thank you for sharing.
Anonymousabout 20 years agoPardon me, but you sound obsessive and I worry for the girl in the AV. But hey, it is just a poem... right?
