One of the Roving Kind

Interesting enough to read once but not poetic enough to read twice, at least, for me. Still very interesting and thanks for sharing.

maybe, if I'm right, the words used fit, I really had to look for the clues.

I like the sound of the words.

I would take YDD's implied advice, and moderate...

IMHO YDD is the best critic here.

So what am I saying? - I heartily agree with all below. Or put another way, this has value, but maybe requiring too much effort for the value that it has, or overpriced for the market its in.

Not only did I find substance beneath the structure, but I also enjoy those poems created of structure alone.

Please continue, Reltne.

This new poet is too word-bound to make sense.

A poem should not require a dictionary and thesaurus

to be comprehensible, much less enjoyable.

This work overuses alliteration and rhyme

in an attempt to impress.

Few here possess the interest

nor will spend the time required

to discover that unwrapped

this poem yields nothing.

It is a creation of structure not substance.

It might as well be Jabberwocky,

though never as well.

I read what it was about I thought it was an interesting rhyme scheme and some thesaurus work.

NOW

I think it's a great piece

Thank you